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klein · 04-15-2007, 07:02 PM

hi good day!

What could I add/ do to make it a better experience? the site is Local and Wide Network Support - Nmnetworksolutions.net and
Ready made web site for rent at Rent-your-website

thanks!

aquariancore · 04-16-2007, 11:02 AM

I never said this until now when reviewing a site. the homepage is blow them away great. But..... Optimize that intro a bit more because it took a few seconds to load on excellent broadband. DSL and dialup may have problems. Remember DSL quality varies greatly. Also I didn't hear the sound and I tried the on off control and reloaded still nothing

Some suggestions.

Reduce your sound file to 16 bit stereo. If sound is set to streaming change that. If you are using jpg convert to png and size slightly smaller. Except for the loss of sound in cable broadband you are great.

SageMother · 04-16-2007, 11:12 AM

I don't really like flash intros but that is a personal preference. I think having the page load faster is more important and if someone wants to show of their skills in flash, video, or other time consumers I feel it should be something on a page dedicated to its display as an example of talent.

I love this statement:

"organisational and project management expertise with a skill that our competitors have lost - the ability to listen."

That line made the sale for me.

klein · 04-16-2007, 05:41 PM

thanks a lot guys for your suggestions and comments, will do that.

10cents · 04-16-2007, 08:56 PM

Network solutions ===> clean and neat. I like the over-all design but I'm not a fan of flash. You also need to format your text better. The commas and period looks like they are where they are supposed to be. They covey sloppy work rather than professionalism.

rent-your-website.org ===> Nice concept and I like the header/graphics. Same problem with the text. Alignment and formatting.

aquariancore · 04-27-2007, 01:05 PM

I rechecked you page and I still don't get the sound on your intro.

randle · 05-16-2007, 11:08 AM

The site is actually good, better than what i have done here lately. I think the creativeness is missing something but its seeming to come together pretty well.

junglebunny · 05-16-2007, 03:16 PM

There isn't anything missing really randle, all it needs it a little tune up but other than that its pretty cool if i may say so myself. I could be learning somethings from the site owner:D

xeric · 05-17-2007, 03:52 AM

website is quite good maintained but dont know why, i am feeling like something is missing. may be thats because of the fonts used over there. but over all, its fantastic. good enough for network solutioin website.

but hey ur logo text is little bit not strong why is so..? make a strong one.

shall i make one...??